With My Last Breath(Rewriting)
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Last published Wed, Aug 31, 2011
Andrea is like any girl her age. She is looking for her true love. She never thought she would find it until she met Jaocb Giddian. He was everything that she wanted. Their lives were perfect until the floor dropped from underneath their feet and Andrea's heart and world shattered to pieces. When she thought all hope was lost and she was close to losing herself she ran into Zak Buchanan. He tried to fix her shattered heart, but when some local girls are murdered, Andrea starts getting little notes around the house. GET OUT! YOUR NEXT! Who is sending these notes? Why do they want her?
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