The Dark Abyss
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Complete Thu, Jan 8, 201531m
"Lost in thought, I let the darkness consume me forever as I fell into a dark abyss."
Disclaimer: This started out as a rag-tag 8th grade English assignment, filled with more plot holes and grammatical errors than fathomable. But it's also a pretty nifty and somewhat cool thingamabob that we're somewhat proud of. Approach with caution:)
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