Smoke on Xalia
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Last published Sat, Jun 5, 2021
A story in progress.
In this story you accompany a group of characters who have gone on a mission to find a cure for an infection of creatures on their planet.
They travel to different areas in a submarine and form bonds with each other.
Just to clarify, this is a fantasy book that I am working on and I am posting it here to receive constructive criticism.
If people like it I'll keep posting.
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