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Where did Limbo go Wrong
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Ongoing, First published May 27, 2021
c!Tommy = Cannon/Dream Smp Tommy
pas!Tommy = passerine Tommy



Black. c!Tommy sees just black in his limbo. 

What if though, what if pas!Tommy sees just white in his limbo? 

What if they're polar opposites but at the same time, completely the same?

What if, some kind of... friction, if you will, happens between the two in the void, causing a malfunction in the Passerine world and somehow, sending pas!Tommy to the dark limbo of c!Tommy, to the Dream Smp limbo instead of remaining dead in the Passerine limbo. 

What happens when Dream bring c!Tommy back to life..?- With an additional pas!Tommy?

What happens when this singular friction happens to be the end of the pas!World, bringing everyone inside of it (except the already dead ones) into their desired realities.----pas!Wilbur's and pas!Techno's, being wherever pas!Tommy is. 

Some of the Dream Smp might have to start getting used to themselves...

Or;

Pas!Tommy dies, and c!Tommy die at the same time, just different worlds. When c!Dream revives c!Tommy, it creates a severe malfunction in logic and causes pas!tommy to end up in the Dream smp world... eventually, bringing along all of his loved ones aswell
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