The Queen of Thieves
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Took me long enough lol, hope you guys enjoy
(So, this is a mess, it still needs a lot of work. But I've been staring at it and rewriting it for too many years so I figure it's time for a second opinion or three. As usual, there are run on sentences galore, and if I'm honest, I'm not even sure if the prologue is something I want to keep but I guess that's why I'm getting you guys to tell me what you think. So, yeah, hope you enjoy.)
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