The Unbalanced Exchange

The Unbalanced Exchange

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Science Fiction
Esi Arnava Yamzon is someone who is often cold and composed who talks sarcastically. She is a woman of Science. She always wants things beyond what our naked eyes can see. Then in the middle of Winter, their Science Professor declared that the class where Esi belongs will be having a Science Output where the students are free to choose their subject. The group where Esi associates agreed to her plan of making a time machine. Until one night, the eve before Christmas Day, they decided to attempt a trial on the contraption they made with Esi being the person to be transported. And to Esi's surprise, it worked. But instead of travelling time, she travelled dimensions leading her to a parallel universe.
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Three girls, in three different worlds. Yet they are all strangely connected. They are all haunted by a ghastly creature. NOTE: This story jumps between three different characters in a disorienting way, which I did intentionally (for a reason that I can't say without revealing spoilers). However, in hindsight, I realize that this might also be off-putting to some readers. If you are not dissuaded, you will begin to see a pattern to the transitions (and the reason for them), and I promise you that, by the end, everything will come together and make sense. Anyway, let me know what you think! Is the way I tell this story interesting and mysterious, or just confusing?

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