Some crimes committed (unfinished)

This is really just the beginning of it. i started writing this in one of my classes and kind of got really into it. this story is really complex (in my head atleast lol) I will post updates and such but for now take this

Sum up of the story so far:
crazy boy with metal magic escapes from asylum

heres some character names and powers btw (you haven't met two of them)

Noah: Telekinesis aka move things with your mind

Alvin: Ferrokinesis aka metal manipulation (forgive me if i got that wrong)

Pyrokinesis aka Ability to generate and control fire

please let me know if there is anything i can improve on