The Eagle
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Last published Sat, Jun 12, 2021
A dystopian story that's inspired by "Examination day" by Henry Slesar. Intelligence is the biggest fear in the society, it's believed that getting rid of the intelligent ones can create an equal society, but is this really equality and true peace?
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