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Where Did It Go Wrong?

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Reads 8,220
Votes 262
Parts 32
Time 3h 26m

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10commandments 7ds ban demonsandangels derieri derierixmonspeet diane escanor gloxinia king melban meldris meliodas melizabeth merlin monspeet sevendeadlysins zeldris

A tale of two brothers, one raised the other & betrayed their race and one was vengeful. Zeldris was born and hated Meliodas who was the strongest person besides the Demon King but after his betrayal... What happens when they all meet again, 3000 years later? 

Involves the Sins eventually! The story starts with Meliodas' life with raising his brother and then he meets Elizabeth then it will involve the after and FINALLY it'll get to 'present day' when the 10 commandments are finally freed. 

This story doesn't involve Estarossa. 

Got the 1st #meldris, the 37th#demonsandangels & 3rd #7ds medals🏅All Rights Reserved

10commandments 7ds ban demonsandangels derieri derierixmonspeet diane escanor gloxinia king melban meldris meliodas melizabeth merlin monspeet sevendeadlysins zeldris

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You Promised... by SarahGalaxy2

(Y/n), (L/n) is a powerful warrior in the demon clan, she's also the second leader of the ten commandments and the wife of the Demon King's oldest son, meliodas. He promised (Y/n) that he will only love her, only for him to break it when he meets a certain goddess, the Supreme deity's daughter, Elizabeth and started to change towards (Y/n) becoming heartless and cold to his wife, this had her be suspicious and confused of why he is acting like this, so she decided to follow him one day. Only to have her heart broke into pieces when she saw meliodas be with the goddess Elizabeth, looking happy and soft to her and not to (Y/n), she left before she could watch anything else happen. She started to distance and be cold to her husband. One day, when (Y/n) went on a mission that had her meet Elizabeth who had fallen in love with her, (Y/n) finally has someone that loves and care for her causing her to betrayed the demon clan then one day, meliodas did as well. Meliodas regretted deeply for hurting his wife and betraying her after seeing her so happy with his brother and elizabeth that helped fix the pieces of her broken heart. Then everything changed when the Demon King and Supreme Deity had cursed the two demons and the Goddess, where meliodas will never age and be revived, the Goddess will reincarnated with no memories of her past and live a short life as a human, (Y/n) having to watch her lover die in front of her and couldn't do anything to protect her when the goddess curse activates. This curse is a suffering but mostly to meliodas where he has to see (Y/n) fall in love with Elizabeth over and over again, not able to do anything about it. He finally understood his wife's pain, so he promised himself to only love her. But, it seems elizabeth and meliodas isn't the only one that is after (Y/n)'s heart when she started meeting people that become important her and began to love her of who she is and will do anything to keep her safe and happy no matter.

ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛʟᴇꜱꜱ ᴘʀɪɴᴄᴇ | ᴢᴇʟᴅʀɪꜱ x ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ | ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴇᴅɪᴛɪɴɢ by lostgipsydanger

ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴇᴅɪᴛɪɴɢ Killing her father, the General of the Demon Army, was the only way (Y/n)'s best friend and his lover could escape and in doing so, (Y/n) and Meliodas, the eldest son of the Demon King, started the Holy War. For 3,000 years, (Y/n) travelled with Meliodas and tried to find a way to break the terrible curse placed upon him and Elizabeth the Goddess. But for the past sixteen years, after Liz's death in the Kingdom of Danafor, (Y/n) has locked herself away from the world in order to protect her best friend and Elizabeth. Or at least, this is what she tells herself. However, the Demons that were locked away over 3,000 years ago have broken through the seal so (Y/n) must reemerge from the shadows to face them once again. With Meliodas, Elizabeth, and the Seven Deadly Sins by her side, (Y/n) must take down the Ten Commandments and protect the realm she has come to call home. Unfortunately, unbeknownst to her best friend, (Y/n) is running out of time because of the curse secretly placed on her 3,000 years ago by the Demon King. But there's a certain younger Demon Prince who's willing to destroy everything in his path to protect her. 🌸 💜 🌸 ❝ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ʟᴇᴛ ᴍᴇ ɢᴏ.❞ ❝ɪ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ʜᴀᴠᴇ. ᴀɴᴅ ɪ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ᴡɪʟʟ, (ʏ/ɴ).❞ 🌸 💜 🌸 ❝ ᴵ'ᵐ ʰᵒˡᵈⁱⁿᵍ ᵒⁿ ᵗᵒ ᵖⁱᵉᶜᵉˢ ᵒᶠ ᵘˢ ᵀʰᵃᵗ ᴵ ʲᵘˢᵗ ᶜᵃⁿ'ᵗ ˡᵉᵗ ᵍᵒ ᴵ ᵏⁿᵒʷ ᵗʰⁱˢ ⁱˢ ᵃ ᵈᵉˢᵖᵉʳᵃᵗᵉ ᵏⁱⁿᵈ ᵒᶠ ˡᵒᵛᵉ ᴮᵘᵗ ⁱᵗ ᶠᵉᵉˡˢ ˡⁱᵏᵉ ⁱᵗ'ˢ ʰᵒᵐᵉ ❞ 🌸 💜 🌸 𝗜 𝗺𝗮𝗱𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆'𝘀 𝗰𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝗖𝗮𝗻𝘃𝗮 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗶𝗺𝗮𝗴𝗲𝘀 𝗱𝗼𝗻'𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗼 𝗺𝗲!

My Brother by JustAnotherValkyrie

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DEMONS (Meliodas x Reader) by ChloeGalexy

You have been with the captain since he was born, you were with the ten commandments with him, you joined the eight deadly sins with him, you were his right hand woman but then elizabeth came in she changed him put him through so much pain... but ill always be there for him. Even though i hate her I will never hurt her it would hurt him... So I suffer in Silence. What will happen when the ten commandments come? Does Meliodas feel things for you? Find out. MANGA SPOILERS I DO NOT OWN SEVEN DEADLY SINS 0ctober 26 2018 - May 4 2019

The Demon Of Notre Dame by SarahGalaxy2

This is a story of two brothers, a young blonde man with beautiful green eyes and a young raven man with red scarlet eyes, a scar over his handsome face but people still sees him as a monstrous demon. The young blonde man become captain of the knights and a servant for an strict cruel man that is the minister of justice. The judge taken care of the two brothers for almost their whole life, clouding them lies about the race that he is after and wanted to get rid, the gypsies and that the world is cruel and wicked. These brothers didn't know that they are related, they don't even know their existence to each other because of their master making sure to never have them meet each other and know, they're related. But when they came upon a beautiful woman who had gorgeous (h/l), (h/c) hair and had these lovely (e/c) eyes that they could stare into forever with pretty soft (s/c) skin. Their life's changed ever since they meet the gorgeous woman whose name is (Y/n), (L/n) and will have them see of what their master told them about the world and the people is a lie even will finally have the brother reunion and slowly figure out that they are related. Come read this book of (Y/n)'s story of her meeting the two brothers and her bond with them, whose name are meliodas and zeldris.

Melancholy (Meliodas x reader x zeldris) by IfStanWasEmo

⚠️Read warnings before you read⚠️ [COMPLETED] [OLD] (Formerly called: She's Mine!) Sorry not editing this. The mistakes will remain. You are the demon kings daughter. Made out to be the fiercest most deadly Demon of all time. 3000 years ago you commanded the 10 commandments along side Meliodas. Until the betrayal as holy war broke out and the goddess race sealed the demons away for all eternity. Until that is you felt a crack in the barrier that restricted you from the outside world. (We're gonna pretend like zeldris and meliodas arent the demon kings sons. Okay. Do it for me just this one story) Inspiration by: @zetears Warnings: smut, suicide, death, major character death, cheating, inaccurate depiction of how someone would act to cheating, slight Elizabeth x reader

The Demon's Forever [Meliodas] by bethanyjanebooks

The battle against the Holy Knights of Britannia is over and The Eight Deadly Sins are now able to live in piece, but not for long. The demon clans seal is broken and all hell is about to break loose all over Britannia, are Meliodas, Y/N and The Eight Deadly Sins enough to put the demons and The Ten Commandments down? ▪︎Sequel to The Demon's Wife

ᴍʏ ɢᴜᴀʀᴅɪᴀɴ ᴀɴɢᴇʟ | ᴢᴇʟᴅʀɪꜱ x ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ by lostgipsydanger

(Y/n) is the younger sister of Elizabeth, the Commandment of Benevolence, the leader of the Ten Commandments. Or at least this is who Elizabeth was before she betrayed the Demon race and started the Holy War with her lover, Meliodas; the eldest son of the Supreme Deity. The two Gods placed a curse not only on the two lovers but also on the younger son of the Supreme Deity, Zeldris, who helped them to escape. Elizabeth is cursed with immortality whereas the Goddess brothers are cursed to live as Humans without any recollection of their pasts. If either one regains their memories, they both die three days later and are resurrected as Humans again. And this cruel cycle goes on and on. Now that she's the only Royal child in the Demon Realm, (Y/n) will make sure she becomes the next Demon Queen. Her cruel mother murdered her best friend, Gelda, from the Vampire race and cursed her other best friend, Zeldris. So (Y/n) made a promise to them that she would make her mother pay for the pain she inflicted upon them. And for Zeldris who saved her all those years, (Y/n) will burn the whole world just to see him safe and happy. Because he means everything to her. 🌸 💜 🌸 ❝ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴀ ᴅᴇᴍᴏɴ ᴅᴏᴇꜱɴ'ᴛ ᴅᴇꜰɪɴᴇ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛʀᴜʟʏ ᴀʀᴇ.❞ ❝ꜱᴀʏꜱ ᴛʜᴇ ɢᴏᴏᴅʏ-ᴛᴡᴏ-ꜱʜᴏᴇꜱ ɢᴏᴅᴅᴇꜱꜱ.❞ 🌸 💜 🌸 ❝ ᴵᶠ ʷᵉ ᵍᵒ ᵈᵒʷⁿ, ᵗʰᵉⁿ ʷᵉ ᵍᵒ ᵈᵒʷⁿ ᵗᵒᵍᵉᵗʰᵉʳ ᵂᵉ'ˡˡ ᵍᵉᵗ ᵃʷᵃʸ ʷⁱᵗʰ ᵉᵛᵉʳʸᵗʰⁱⁿᵍ ᴸᵉᵗ'ˢ ˢʰᵒʷ ᵗʰᵉᵐ ʷᵉ ᵃʳᵉ ᵇᵉᵗᵗᵉʳ ❞ 🌸 💜 🌸 𝗜 𝗺𝗮𝗱𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆'𝘀 𝗰𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝗖𝗮𝗻𝘃𝗮 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗶𝗺𝗮𝗴𝗲𝘀 𝗱𝗼 𝗻𝗼𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗼 𝗺𝗲!

Between Two Worlds (Melizabeth) -SDS- by xXAkina_OtakuXx

After the goddess clan is brutally murdered and destroyed by the demon clan, Meliodas, the demon clan's first prince and captain of the ten commandments, kills his demon king father and takes the throne and begins to spread fear and terror to all clans. The kingdom of Liones and other clans belonging to the human clan unite and begin to struggle against the terror of the new demon king. Elizabeth, on the other hand, was found by the human clan on the day of the slaughter and is the stepdaughter of King Barta and the 3rd princess of the Liones kingdom. Will Meliodas and Elizabeth meet each other? What awaits their clan with the arrival of the new demon king?

ᴏᴜʀ ᴅᴏᴡɴꜰᴀʟʟ | ᴍᴇʟɪᴏᴅᴀꜱ x ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ by lostgipsydanger

(Y/n), the eldest child of the Purgatorian Queen, has been sealed away in the treacherous lands she was born in along with her younger brother and her callous mother. Her punishment for befriending both the Demon and Goddess race is to be forgotten by the rest of the world, including her lover, the eldest son of the Demon King, who was also cursed to love their best friend Elizabeth, the only child of the Supreme Deity. The moment to be reunited with Meliodas and Elizabeth finally arrives when Elizabeth's true lover, the youngest son of the Demon King, contacts (Y/n) to tell her that one of the Ten Commandments has successfully broken the seal placed on both the Demon Realm and Purgatory. With Zeldris by her side, (Y/n) intends to keep the promise she made to the one who changed her life, to bring an end to all three Gods to make sure that everyone can live in a peaceful world. (Y/n)'s love may have gotten her cursed but her love is the very thing that will drive her on to protect Meliodas. Enduring 3,000 years of hell was nothing and if saving Meliodas means turning the whole world against her then so be it. 🌸 💛 🌸 ❝ᴡᴇʟʟ, ᴡᴇʟʟ, ᴡᴇʟʟ. ʏᴏᴜ'ʀᴇ ᴘʀᴇᴛᴛʏ ᴅɪʀᴛʏ-ᴍɪɴᴅᴇᴅ.❞ ❝ᴏɴʟʏ ʙᴇᴄᴀᴜꜱᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ɪᴍᴘʟɪᴇᴅ ɪᴛ!❞ 🌸 💛 🌸 ❝ ᴴᵒʷ ᵈⁱᵈ ʷᵉ ᵍᵒ ᶠʳᵒᵐ ᵇᵉⁱⁿᵍ ᵗʰᵉ ᵖᵉʳᶠᵉᶜᵗ ᵗʷᵒ ᵀᵒ ˢᵗʳᵃⁿᵍᵉʳˢ ⁱⁿ ᵃ ʳᵒᵒᵐ? ᴵ'ᵐᵃ ⁿᵉᵉᵈ ˢᵒᵐᵉ ᵗʰᵉʳᵃᵖʸ ❞ 🌸 💛 🌸 𝗜 𝗺𝗮𝗱𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆'𝘀 𝗰𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝗖𝗮𝗻𝘃𝗮 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗶𝗺𝗮𝗴𝗲𝘀 𝗱𝗼 𝗻𝗼𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗼 𝗺𝗲!

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My Brother cover

DEMONS (Meliodas x Reader) cover

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Between Two Worlds (Melizabeth) -SDS- cover

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You Promised...

(Y/n), (L/n) is a powerful warrior in the demon clan, she's also the second leader of the ten commandments and the wife of the Demon King's oldest son, meliodas. He promised (Y/n) that he will only love her, only for him to break it when he meets a certain goddess, the Supreme deity's daughter, Elizabeth and started to change towards (Y/n) becoming heartless and cold to his wife, this had her be suspicious and confused of why he is acting like this, so she decided to follow him one day. Only to have her heart broke into pieces when she saw meliodas be with the goddess Elizabeth, looking happy and soft to her and not to (Y/n), she left before she could watch anything else happen. She started to distance and be cold to her husband. One day, when (Y/n) went on a mission that had her meet Elizabeth who had fallen in love with her, (Y/n) finally has someone that loves and care for her causing her to betrayed the demon clan then one day, meliodas did as well. Meliodas regretted deeply for hurting his wife and betraying her after seeing her so happy with his brother and elizabeth that helped fix the pieces of her broken heart. Then everything changed when the Demon King and Supreme Deity had cursed the two demons and the Goddess, where meliodas will never age and be revived, the Goddess will reincarnated with no memories of her past and live a short life as a human, (Y/n) having to watch her lover die in front of her and couldn't do anything to protect her when the goddess curse activates. This curse is a suffering but mostly to meliodas where he has to see (Y/n) fall in love with Elizabeth over and over again, not able to do anything about it. He finally understood his wife's pain, so he promised himself to only love her. But, it seems elizabeth and meliodas isn't the only one that is after (Y/n)'s heart when she started meeting people that become important her and began to love her of who she is and will do anything to keep her safe and happy no matter.