Story Pilots
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Ongoing9m
Last published Mon, Jun 28, 2021
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I have a lot of ideas.
That's both a blessing, and a curse.
I can constantly think up new stories. It's great, cause I always have something to work on. Problem is, the moment I start thinking up a new story, I put the other ideas on hold. Then, when I inevitably return to old ideas, I've forgotten how they go. Then, I end up with a mess of characters I don't know what to do with.
So, I started doing story pilots. They're short, quick written ideas for storys. Just the start of a story, and letting it naturally develope from there. Sometimes the story ends up being completely different, but that's okey, because at least I still had it's base idea to come back to as a reminder and starting point.
It also helps because they're easy to show people. I can show a bunch of pilots, and let people creteque from there! Tell me which pilots work, which don't. Which they like more than others, which they dislike at all. Ideas for the story, what should be cut or developed on.
I guess what I'm trying to say is, comment all you want on any pilot you want. Tell me any thought you may have, I adore feedback! Star ones you like, just let me know what you feel about any pilot you want!
All I ask is you be respectful, kind, and above all truthful. I look forward to anything!
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