The Pure System

The Pure System

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At age 16 everything is normal. At age 16 everything changes. • • • • Spencer Shell has just turned 16. She is now forced into the Pure System to be tested and trained. Spencer is far from alone. All her friends come with her and even her enemies. In the system Spencer can see her friends changing. Following orders, being polite, never talking back, but Spencer doesn't see why they're doing that. Until she finds out. Horrified Spencer has to keep this new information to herself or she is dead. Spencer tries to blend in but it's not working out for her. Can Spencer hid her secret form the Prurience? Can she save her friends in time? Or will she be taken by the void? • • • In life and love. In poor and in wealth. The system is pure And so is your health.
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