My BFF and I

This book is about a love triangle and an emotional roller-coaster. I don't want to give much away but it is pretty much a girl power, boys suck kind of thing. And I hope you can give me feedback on it and tell me honestly if you like it or what I can fix. Anyway I hope you enjoy and I will try to finish it as fast as possible. Here is a quote from the first part.

"Um, can I sit with you?" I look at him like my mom does with me.
"Um, why would you think that you could?" He looks at me the same way in a mocking term.
"Well most people are respectful and respond with 'Oh yeah of course'." I look at him more seriously. "I just need to sit down not to have a conversation with you just to sit."
"Well sorry to burst your bubble but not everyone here is what you think so I know
this might be heartbreaking but the answer will be a no, sweetheart." He looks at me with a forced smile. This is where most people walk away but why on earth would I just let that go?
"First of all, I think I would be the first to know that not everyone dances on rainbows and sings songs but at least they have self respect. Two, do not even think about calling me sweetheart. Three, trust me when I say that I wouldn't even think of sitting with you if you didn't have a seat next to you. So let's not get too cocky here when in reality I just want what is next to you." I start to speak in a higher mocking voice, "So sorry to burst your bubble but not everyone sees you as some guy that all of the girls fall for. Most people just see you as an asshole."