Alpha Australias a fantasy fiction novel

To tell this story I needed several
Characters and I needed them to be able to work together and keep a huge secret
so I chose, in the first part of the book, to have all of the characters in the
same family--The Jones Family. I needed to have very intelligent characters and
they needed to know about space so I chose Bill Jones to head the family. Bill is
very smart, the youngest physics professor the University had ever had and his
wife Mary, also very intelligent though more conservative than Bill. I needed
more characters so they had eight very smart kids for me to use as characters..

Now, long story short.

         The same day as the last of their
children were born, twins Tanya and Carla, Mary received word that she was
finally going to have one of her science fiction books published.  It went fairly quickly to best seller and the
publishers wanted more books. Now the Jones family had the finances to do as
they always wanted, they bought a smallish property in central outback
Queensland here they built an observatory to study their much loved stars and
Bill began a project— building  a rocket.

              Not
far from there property the was a mountain called for some reason, Saucer
Mountain. It was on a trip to the top of saucer mountain that their life long
adventure began. Here the twins found Ace and Dce two stones they called them
but they were far from stones they took them to their dream world Outer Space..

              It
didn’t happen over night but it did happen and let me say now, no matter what
you hear or what you think this is fiction, it didn’t really happen, it is not
happening now. It really isn’t, read on and tell me what you think. Does my
story move too slow? Is there too much detail or is it just a good read.

I’ve put the first few chapters up
here for you to sample.

I’d love you know your opinion of it.. enjoy…micklow..