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Hi! This is my feedback for you! I couldn't do it private so here it is. It's been annotated and stuff! For @ShadowCat844 btw!
If you're reading this and you're not ShadowCat then basically this is my help book for if you want feedback on a story or chapter.
What I do is I write the chaper in my own style and then annotate it and show you what you need to improve in my opinion. If you wanted to be featured in this book just private message me :)
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