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Hi! This is my feedback for you! I couldn't do it private so here it is. It's been annotated and stuff! For @ShadowCat844 btw!

If you're reading this and you're not ShadowCat then basically this is my help book for if you want feedback on a story or chapter. 

What I do is I write the chaper in my own style and then annotate it and show you what you need to improve in my opinion. If you wanted to be featured in this book just private message me :)All Rights Reserved

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HER. [Creepypasta Various x Reader] by _Bumble_Bich_

Your life was... average but you liked it that way. The only thing you needed was the internet and sleep. It was peacfull. Wouldn't it be a shame if all changed? ~ ☆Follow the chaotic adventures of, well you! Let's see how well you manage when suddenly life isn't what it used to be and weird people start falling for you.☆ ◇WARNINGS◇ • English is not my first language 🤧 • crack treated semi seriously (not) • cringe incoming • i cannot for the life of me write believable dialogue • fem reader, but that's up to debate • the more recent chapters (like 4,5 etc) are better written sooo just keep that in mind while reading the starter chaps • also the more recent chapters are gonna be longer (since it is my first time trying to commit to a story ill try to do 1000 or more words on average) • MAY GET A BIT SPICY 🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵 IDK WE'LL SEE 🙈🙈 Enjoy ♡ (or don't)

EFF IT! ➸ jj maybank by zcndayas

☆彡 𝗼𝘂𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗯𝗮𝗻𝗸𝘀 ❛ bring me your mouth and your mystery! ❜ sonny hated mysteries, but she was the biggest one of all in jj's opinion. UNDER EDITING a tasting summer novel! PLOT outer banks s1+ ( jj maybank x fem!oc ) ( pope heyward x male!oc ) #1 in outerbanks #2 in jjmaybank #2 in popeheyward #1 in johnbroutledge #1 in sarahcameron cover by tiishas I DO NOT OWN THE OUTER BANKS CHARACTERS OR PLOT. I ONLY OWN MY OWN OC'S AND MY OWN ADDITIONS TO THE NARRATIVE.

My Imaginary Story Book by readharshitraj

HELLOW READERS Nice to see that you are reading my book. Soo, it is my first book actually, in which I am putting in all of my short stories written till now. Some things which you must know about this book:- 1> The name of the chapter will be the name of the story. 2> It does not contain any adult content, so you can read it without any fear of getting caught ;-> :-> 3> Each chapter is a short story. 4> Each story has been written by me alone, I have not taken help from anyone. 5> All characters are owned by me. Please... ...Give me feedback in the comments... ...Tell me which one you liked the most... ...Tell me which type of story you like the most... ...Tell me what should I do to improve my stories. VOTE; COMMENT AND FOLLOW TO GET SIMILAR AND BETTER STORIES / BOOKS 📚 BE HAPPY😄😄; BE SAFE AND... ENJOY!!!

My Girl - JJ Maybank x female OC by ellajge

Best friends since 3rd grade, Riley and JJ have always been there for each other, especially after Riley's parents died, but when the pogues go on a treasure hunt to find £400 million, will things stay that way, or will it develop into something more? Will JJ be able to save Riley from her own dark thoughts? JJ Maybank x Female OC Trigger warnings- - depression - self harm -assault #2 in jjmaybank Disclaimer- I have put trigger warnings for a lot of chapters, however i haven't for every chapter with a trigger warning in it. This is your warning now the whole story could trigger people, so if you're effected by any of the topics above, please don't read this story. I don't own any characters or plot lines apart from Riley and any of her storylines

JJ Maybank Imagines by happypotator

✨mOlD iS gOoD fOr YoU iTs JuSt A nAtUrAl oRgAnIsM✨ ✨But you..Don't like freedom very much now do ya cupcake?✨ ✨bOnG wAtEr?✨ ✨what the fffff fu- fudggee✨ ✨straight up like the Spanish, just bon voyage!✨ Imagines of our favourite blonde, The one and only JJ Maybank! Warning: includes topics that could make some readers uncomfortable. These Topics include things like: Abuse, Self harm, Drug use, cuss words, sexual interaction, manipulative and toxic relationships, Death, traumatic events, etc. I do not want to put anyone in a position where they are uncomfortable reading my book, if you feel that any of these topics could be triggering please refrain from reading this book. <3 I do not stand for Hate so please do not spread it on my page, or anywhere for that matter. All Hate will be blocked removed from my comments and you will be blocked from my page. If you don't like it, don't read it. It's that simple. There's no need to put others down just cause you don't enjoy my writing. I do work hard on these chapters so it would be very kind of you if you could not steal my work. I put time and effort into making this and I would greatly appreciate if I got the credit for it. Ps: please leave comments!!! I love nothing more than to post a chapter and read all the funny and sweet comments you guys leave it literally makes my day! <3 There's most likely spelling mistakes in here so I'm sorry, and if you come across them be sure to leave a message and I'll fix it! Suggestions are always open, and if you notice something you don't like about my writing let me know and I will change it. I would love to hear what you guys think about my writing because I do hope to become better in the future. Ok enough babbling lets go fantasize about JJ!

Mackenzie's Critique Shop by UnidentifiedIsHere

[PERMANENTLY CLOSED] Want a genuine reader and helpful critiques? In this shop, I offer you helpful advice and outlook on your book, all while commenting and voting! I try my best to read everything in your story, and provide as helpful outlooks on it as I can. Check inside for more details. ... [] OPEN [] CLOSED FOR CATCH UP [] HIATUS [!] PERMANENTLY CLOSED

𝙖𝙙𝙢𝙞𝙧𝙚 ✽ 𝙟𝙞𝙖𝙧𝙖 by mollylovesobx

TW: mentions of: assault, abuse, rape, sex, violence, self harm ____________________________________ it's crazy how much one person can affect your life... you get so used to having them there that when something happens and they're suddenly not there, and there's a risk of them never being there again, everything breaks. you break. _________________ i put kiara and jj through so much pain in this book so i apologise in advance. but their love and comfort for each other is strong enough to get them through it. i also put sarah through quite a lot too but all the pogues have each other. they get each other through it all. _____________

Prisimpad: A Guide to Wattpad, Writing, and Whatever by Prisim

I will no longer be updating this guide. I'm leaving it up in case it will continue to be helpful to anyone in the future. People have asked me writing tips, Wattpad tips, and whatever. This is some of that advice I give them. Keep in mind most of this is my opinion in addition to things other people have taught me to do and not to do. It is by no means 100% to be followed but only a guide to get you thinking. The beauty of writing is that there is no one correct answer. We each learn and adapt to our own personal styles.

☀︎︎Ment to be Lovers❤︎ by Stylimars

hello this is my first time writing im sorry if i misspelled some words please give me some ideas so i can make it more readable for you -xxx charly no spoilers:) WARNING ⚠️ Cussing a little bit of smut No nasty words like pussy or dick Some cringe parts Im very slow and lazy:) some love parts& and some parts in the story that have no logic:)

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HER. [Creepypasta Various x Reader]

Your life was... average but you liked it that way. The only thing you needed was the internet and sleep. It was peacfull. Wouldn't it be a shame if all changed? ~ ☆Follow the chaotic adventures of, well you! Let's see how well you manage when suddenly life isn't what it used to be and weird people start falling for you.☆ ◇WARNINGS◇ • English is not my first language 🤧 • crack treated semi seriously (not) • cringe incoming • i cannot for the life of me write believable dialogue • fem reader, but that's up to debate • the more recent chapters (like 4,5 etc) are better written sooo just keep that in mind while reading the starter chaps • also the more recent chapters are gonna be longer (since it is my first time trying to commit to a story ill try to do 1000 or more words on average) • MAY GET A BIT SPICY 🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵 IDK WE'LL SEE 🙈🙈 Enjoy ♡ (or don't)