I'm not who you think I am
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this is a fictional teen story. i guess it could be considered a sci-fi? anyways its my first story and i'm kinda new here. please read it and give me your true opinion. i'm open to any and all constructive criticism.
this story is about two teens who one day wake up and don't know where they are. they only recognise each other. everyone thinks they are both some one else and they don't know what happened. the two kids have to work together to get back home. the story follows the two teens paths as they go through new social positions, unfamiliar problems, newfound love, and ood awakening. like i said let me know if i should continue the story and give me your advice. Thanks!
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