THE LEGION- Uprising

THE LEGION- Uprising

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"Oh no!!" Dax turned and watched as the Ordons destroyed his village. As if feeling Dax's gaze, one of the Ordons looked directly at Dax and gave a loud screech. The other Ordon raised their heads and saw Dax too. Damn .... I should have run as mother told me to The first Ordon raised it's wing almost the size of two airplanes and flapped up into the air. It's companions followed suit and they flew directly at Dax. He wasn't fazed that much, accelerating at almost Mach 2.5 in less than 2 seconds he was one of the fastest beings in the multiverse. One Ordon swooped down like a bird of prey and crashed into..... the ground Dax risked a glance behind him and looked directly into the eyes of a leading Ordon. He stuck his tongue at it and ran even faster. Then he felt a gathering of energy behind him Uh-Oh....BOOM The rock on which Dax had been one - thirtieth of a second before blasted into cinders. An Ordon had released kind of plasmic energy from its mouth. Running. Dodging. Jumping. Swerving. Dax ran as if his life depended on it.... Well, his life did depend on it. If one of those plasmic bursts touched him... He'd die without even knowing what hit him. One burst of energy shot far above and ahead of him, he turned back to see who was such a lousy aim. He shook his head at them and then boosted even faster. They had no chance at catching him. Except..... He had lost concentration and ran into a crater caused by the plasmic burst that went far ahead of him. He crashed. And tumbled. And rolled. Until he crashed into a large boulder. He realized he had twisted his ankle and probably broken some bones... And the Ordons were still chasing him. The Ordons shot out the blasts. In that same moment the boulder swallowed Dax. The last thing he felt was Pain before he entered Darkness. Utmost, infinite darkness. P.s this is my first novel. Please I need your comments on how I can improve.
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