Kinesis

"The story of a World with Kinetic Powers."

This is on going and as the story grows and takes shape, earlier chapters may be adjusted, as the end goal is to turn the story into a manga/anime. Take this as a semi-polished running draft of the story. As this is my first story/manga, I'm open to any and all criticisms, from grammar and spelling to ideas and plot.

To start the chapters are going to just be chopped up into roughly the same amount of text until I see how to the text is fitting in panel form.