The Dark Revenge
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Last published Sun, Feb 26, 2023
How does a normal next door teenager becomes an extremely smart psychotic murderer??
How does a team of five- a FBI officer, a Forensic doctor, a Police officer, a Hacker and a criminal psychologist catch him??
Can this team catch him before he kills his main target??
Then let's find out...shall we???
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