Last Fears

This is a short story, I wrote for my English class.

You, as there main character, felt asleep and started to dream, not a normal dream, a nightmare. As soon as you open your eyes and sit in the dark room you felt fear. What type of fear? All at once.

I learn English at school so make lots of mistakes, I'm sorry for it.
Also I would love to get some feedback on my short story ( negative and positive (: )