Of Light and Darkness

So this is something new I am trying. Basically, I select orchestrated music and write according to the feel of it. Then I attach the video to the writing when I am finished with it so y'all can tell me if I seemed to match it right, or how close I might have been.

Now my instructions for these are very simple:

1. Play the video before reading and give it 10-15 seconds

2. Begin slowly reading each line as the music continues

3. Leave a comment saying whether you felt it matched the mood right or not.

Any helpful criticism would be nice and appreciated. And votes too...that's always nice. :-P