The Twins
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The two twins Jessica and Joyce think that they have found the perfect man for their mom , but they were wrong if only they could have looked into his life a little more they wouldve known the trouble that they were getting their selves into. Do not take this seriously this was story that i made up in summerschool because i was bored but i am asking for ideas on this story and others
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In the summer of 1960, Liv killed someone who deserved it. But every action has a consequence... *UPDATE: I see I have some new readers! I'm starving for feedback so please feel free to leave me any. Even if it's horrendous, you little goblins. *I'm in the middle of editing this book and seriously considering (after a few beta readers brought up real concern about the ages) raising the protagonist's age. The idea to make her so young was to show how society has a habit of rubber stamping truly perverse behavior towards teenage girls, even though they are just that, girls. It happened in the 60's, it happens now. But I understand how reading it can be distressing. Also, sorry for any glaring grammatical errors, repetitious phrases or mistakes. This is a finished draft, but still a rough draft. Really, very interested in feedback, be it story beats, character, concerns with content. Any and all of it. Thanks!

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