Critiquing Services
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  • Reads 970
  • Votes 24
  • Parts 43
  • Time 51m
Ongoing, First published Dec 03, 2014
This is my section where i write all the books and comments down, that i have critiqued. Some of my critiques may be a bit harsh but i assure you they will be honest. I try not to sugarcoat anything. I feel that only honesty in critiquing will help someone further their progression. Hopefully this will help your reads out as well. So to those stopping by, enjoy. 

Let me add that i do not own any of these books. I didn't have any involvement in writing them neither. Just a guy who will critique and let the wattpad world  know how i feel and in hopes they will read it as well, giving the writer more readers.
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