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Critiquing Services
Mr_Wabusabi
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Mr_Wabusabi
Ongoing, First published Dec 03, 2014
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This is my section where i write all the books and comments down, that i have critiqued. Some of my critiques may be a bit harsh but i assure you they will be honest. I try not to sugarcoat anything. I feel that only honesty in critiquing will help someone further their progression. Hopefully this will help your reads out as well. So to those stopping by, enjoy. 

Let me add that i do not own any of these books. I didn't have any involvement in writing them neither. Just a guy who will critique and let the wattpad world  know how i feel and in hopes they will read it as well, giving the writer more readers.
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Here's A Secret... My Life Sucks

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Hey guys! This is a book I have been working on since I was like 14 and I am 19 now. I finished it a while ago and decided to upload it on here to see what the outcome would be. If you like it please let me know, and feel free to give me some feedback because I am currently working on the sequel and would like more direction as to what I should add or remove.

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