The Eternal Flame
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Ongoing, First published Dec 03, 2014
Your heart beats faster by the second... Your hands are shaking... Your breath quickens. You stare at the screen with little hope. A minute passes~ Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock. No Answer.  Now lets zoom out from this picture, to a 3rd person point of view. What do you see? A teenager on his phone waiting for that answer that doesn't come. What does he feel? I can see sadness growing within him.  The last thing he typed was 2 minutes ago.     What he typed was, "I don't think this is going to work anymore, I'm Sorry."
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