The Eternal Flame

The Eternal Flame

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Your heart beats faster by the second... Your hands are shaking... Your breath quickens. You stare at the screen with little hope. A minute passes~ Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock. No Answer.  Now lets zoom out from this picture, to a 3rd person point of view. What do you see? A teenager on his phone waiting for that answer that doesn't come. What does he feel? I can see sadness growing within him.  The last thing he typed was 2 minutes ago. What he typed was, "I don't think this is going to work anymore, I'm Sorry."
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What is happening!? My life couldn't have been a dream it was so real! I had kids and a husband! Tears burn my eyes. I had a home. It can't just be a dream. I reach up to wipe the tears from my face when I see it. My ring. My infinity-shaped ring with a sapphire diamond. I let out a gasp. It wasn't a dream. But I'm sitting back in class. What. The. Heck.

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