Camdyn's Speech

Camdyn's Speech

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WpMetadataReadTerminé sam., juil. 17, 2021<5 mins
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Fiction
Fantasy
Just a short excerpt from something I've written with a friend. No pressure to read. It's pretty heavy and I'm just trying to work on evoking emotion.
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This is a novella I had to write for school and I would like some feed back. EXCERPT Pain is something I've become very accustomed to. Whether I like it or not. It sounds mental though, I know. My biggest fear is being alone, even though I already am. As I walk into the school I see them, my 'friends'. They're sitting in the quad all chatting to one another. I try to turn around before one sees me but I see one waving me over so I'm left with no choice but to go. "Hey guys" I greet them with a shaky voice. So if anyone has feedback for me or just wants to talk comment or message me anytime and I'll get back to you as soon an I can. Also I need a good book cover so if you send me one I'll use it but in the mean time I'll be looking for one.

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