My own Critique Review

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Reads 276
Votes 12
Parts 9
Time 34m

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Hi every one nag compile ako ng mga personal feedback ko sa mga writer or author na nagpa critic sa akin or beta read ng story nila. 

wala lang gusto ko lang may sovenier heheh  sayang 

edi joke lang. kung baga  gusto ko lang ipaalam iyong mix emotions na naramdaman ko sa pagcritc ng kwento.

ps. kung may mapupuna kayo sa typo error ng aking paglalahad, sa bawat kwento na kasalukuyang nakapublish dito. Pasensya na, wala pa po ako alam sa tamang pag construct ng sentences. 
beta reader po ako 'di pa po ako proofereader. 
 paki-search na lang  kung ano ang pinag kaiba ng beta reader sa proofreader.. salamat :)All Rights Reserved

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