Innocent (Louis Tomlinson)
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  • Reads 2,641
  • Votes 85
  • Parts 57
  • Time 5h 16m
Complete, First published Dec 05, 2014
Mature
They judge her by the way she acts, the way she looks, and the way she dresses. She's all alone, and she's ok with that. No one cares about her, and it's been that way all along. Until Louis Tomlinson comes into her life, and shows her that she actually means something. To him, and everyone else.

This is my first real fanfic and I started it when I was 13 so you can judge it if you want. I realize now that I wasn't a very good writer back then. Trust me though, you can see as I get better/older as it goes on. I think the last 30/20 chapters are a big improvement in comparison to the beginning. I started "Innocent" as a 13 year old and finished it as a 17 year old, and you can tell. 
If there are any cringe mistakes feel free to point them out. Whenever I read this I feel annoyed at myself cause of all the mistakes and I'm too lazy to fix and locate SO MANY of them. 

I can't decide on a cover so it may look different over time
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