Broken Promise
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Last published Wed, Aug 25, 2021
In a world where mages are worshipped just as much as they are feared.
Emporia is a land divided by blood and war. Mages battle over territories, scarring the land, leaving nothing but a trail of dead bodies.
In a village of northern emporia, Eddon is still reeling from the tragic loss of his brother to the war, and having recently recovered from a gripping sickness he painfully tries to get back to his normal life.
But when he finds out the dark secret his father had kept, Eddon's life is turned upside down as he unknowingly becomes the key to saving the world and ending the Mage wars.
He becomes hunted by the most feared mage in all the kingdoms, who is determined to destroy him. Eddon has no choice but to leave all he knows to journey with his companions into the magical world. As Eddon fights to survive, he must prepare to face his destiny and become what he hates.
Eddon must turn and face his demons but when that day comes, will he be ready to face his destiny?
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