The Lich King

One of the few stories I have been working on lately. I play World of Warcraft often, and figured I should write a story on how I think the fight should have really gone down. So far, I only have a few parts of my story complete, and I want to know how I'm doing so far before I continue the story.

Overview of the story: Andistus, a paladin whose parents were slain by the Lich King's army of undead in their first returning invasion, has vowed his life in destroying the Lich King and saving the world. Despite his efforts, the leaders of Azeroth have denied him aid in his endeavor of facing the Lich King, and must now undertake the demanding effort of stopping the army of the undead single-handedly and slay the Lich King alone. Armed with the sword of a god, he charges headstrong towards the blight...