CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM on badly written (fanfictions?)
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Ongoing10m
Last published Tue, Jul 27, 2021
honestly i just want to express my anger here if you're not into this stuff then dont click lol
yea just jenny deciding whether i should cry or laugh because this is so ridiculous
pls support bc i lost braincells from this so we need more people to lose braincells
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