Other side (Kylo Ren X Oc X Hux)

"Commander, General you will take care of her no matter what. If she is to fall into any harm on your watch you will be punished, serverly" said Supreme Leader Snoke with pure seriousness in his strong but frail voice.

"Yes Supreme Leader" General Hux and Commander Ren said in sink with no hesitation in their voice still on their knees on the floor.

"You may rise and leave Commander and General" Snoke said lowing his withering frame onto his thrown.

They both stood tall and turned to to walk away but the Commander with a possible death wish stopped and thou- "What troubles you Ren" Snoke looked into his mind before he has a chance to even ask but waits for him to give an outline statement.

"Who is this women we are protecting Supreme Leader" Ren still ask standing tall trying to block his mind from Snokes powerful force use.

"My daughter" Snoke says without hesitation and a small smirk on his face.

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There ain't be to much about the actually oc's background unroll later in the book as kind of a suspense thing and this is my first book so any tips would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks