Luca Scene Rewrite
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You guys know that scene in Luca where Luca and Alberto get into a fight and Alberto was about to punch Luca right before Giulia came along?? Well, what if Giulia never came. What if Alberto actually punched Luca? SO I BRING YOU THIS!!!
I'm sorry if this isn't the best. This is my first time writing a fanfic since I usually just write stories with my OCs. I found it hard to do this because Alberto and Luca aren't my characters so I don't know how exactly they would act or what they would say. That's why I always write my own stories with my OCs because I created them and their personalities, so I know what they would say. But I guess this is good practice, so it's fine.
Also, I know there are some things I could've improved but it is currently 2:30 am and I just wanna get this over with.
If you have ay criticism or feedback, please let me know!! I wanna improve my writing.
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