The Diabolical

The Diabolical

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Luna Davis is a normal 16-year-old girl just trying to get through High School. She's kind of an introvert, and only has one friend, named Mary, but none of that bothers her as she works hard to enjoy her life. Things are going smoothly. Until the final weekend before the end of school. Luna and Mary meet a new kid their age, John. He moved in right before the end of the school year. Strange timing, Luna thinks, but it seems harmless enough. But ever since that boy moved in, strange things start happening. Luna finds an old friend of hers' that has been practically brainwashed by something she calls "The Diabolical". John starts acting suspicious and talking to the girls less and less. Luna decides she has to figure out what's going on right away. By questioning John and snapping the old friend out of her brainwashing, Luna finds out a horrible secret that will change everyone's life for good. This story kind of has a mix of horror, mystery, and sci-fi. Possibily a little comedy too but that's debatable. It's my first story I've taken seriously so I want to share it here, and I hope it can do well
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