Under commanders orders ( M x M love story )
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COMANDER: " where are you going? I haven't dismissed you yet"
COLE: " I'm following instructions sir"
COMANDER: " who's ? Not mine that's for sure"
COLE: " I Apologize"
COMANDER: " No need, next time, just remember who you should be taking orders from. You can leave, oh and Cole..."
COLE: " yes sir?"
COMANDER: " Always keep your door locked, or something might just slip in"
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After some trouble at home Cole is sent to military training. There he's learning the basics of war and how to survive. What he didn't know however is that he'd be learning a lot more than just that from his teacher and commander. Unbeknownst to him, this so called "training ground" is actually his fathers old home. Having grew up in a completely different world, thanks to his mom, Cole is completely unaware of all the things he's about to learn.
After his mother's death his father is faced with the troubling task of raising a 17 year old all alone. Struggling with life and his own depressive state he reluctantly sends his son Cole away to military school hoping he'd shape up from the rebellious teen he'd become. Shaken, Cole is faced with grief and anger, after taking it out on a bully he's now been transferred to this new life away from home. He thought his life would plunge into the depths, but what if he finds something new to hold on to?
The commander is a stern young newly appointed man. He's anything but social, his colleagues fear him and no one has ever seen him radiate an ounce of emotion. Throw a moody emotional teen into the mix? Maybe this closed off commander will find more than he bargained for and show sides of himself HE hasn't even seen before.
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This story is for mature audiences and WILL contain explicit content please read warnings on Chapter 1 before continuing on to the story.
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