story fix
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Ongoing27m
Last published Sat, Feb 28, 2015
okay i am a major Torchwood Doctor Who fan but i didn't like on how some character died and what happened so this story is all a bout fixing major plot points
i made up a girl name Ari she is going to be my person in this world and so fort. .. the rift tends to pull her back and fort in between the worlds trapping her in the rift causing her to age 0ne years close to every two months in the rift. she loves all the team but the whole time she pulls herself away from them to make sure the story go on track even so she is a tracked to the captain, the ex torchwood one agent, and the sadden doctor. she will be Gwen right wing and Tosh's best friend. and story2 is a bit of a flashy forward and back where part of her life is missing comment the great and powerful Cthulhu commands it if you got that joke if not well your this so your not all bad
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