My Poems
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Last published Sat, Jan 31, 2015
Ello Mates!!
I just wrote a poem!
I never thought I would ever be able to write one so this is amazing!
I want you all to read it and tell me what you think of it!
It's not perfect. It doesn't always rhyme. but it does mostly. I just wanna know if you all think it is fine like it is or do I need to fix it a little bit?
Let me know!
(Note: this is my first poem I've written I'm actually happy with and proud of!. so far I think it's the best I've done so far! doesn't mean it's perfect! I said it's the best I've done. doesn't mean it's any good lol)
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