MIND KILLER
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Last published Sun, Aug 15, 2021
The city has become a dangerous place with a killer lurking around. The group of detectives could catch the killer easily, but there's a problem. The killer can supposedly kill anyone with their mind, or without any physical contact and weapons. No one is seen holding anything suspicious around the crime scene, but all the information are said to prove that this is a murder.
Jannette and her friends go to a journey to find the killer after 2 years of their families' murder by the same killer. They face hardships and difficult situations, but it's never enough for them to give up.
⚠️ WARNING! MAY CONTAIN:
• TRIGGERING TOPICS
• TRIGGERING LANGUAGE
• LGBTQ+
• SAD ENDING
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Thank you for checking this story out, it means a lot. This is my first story ever, and I look forward to all of your comments, feedbacks, suggestions and corrections. I hope you enjoy.
Also I do not know how this whole detective thing works, but I'll try to give as much as correct information as I can. Sorry for any mistakes.
Book cover by me.
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