Alice in... her Dreamland?

a new sick twist on Alice in Wonderland. Alice follows Peter into the rabbit hole and falls into her dream world. It's everything she's ever wanted and more. But is she willing to pay the price? If you have read the first chapter please continue reading. I know it's not as fun as it is not a complete work of art but I am trying my best as I have just recently started writing this. Please keep in mind I have to worry about school and band and art and all that stuff.