Rebirth To Be A Filial Child!(Bl)

NOTE!!:This is not a Chinese translation but my own work.
Im not Chinese so please leave your suggestions to be more respectful^^
Ofcourse Im educated enough about the culture through the vast information online and yes Im Asian Indian so there should be no problem I feel.:D

In the unfortunate years of the not so well-off Tribe anymore, Chenzhi died out of its power and fell from the top to the bottom.

Chen Li's Grandfather, the head of the Tribe had died. The Tribe started falling apart. His parents and older siblings who had always doted on him were now very disappointed in him. They never expected him to ever do something like running off with his concubine and only to return with that witch who backstabbed their Family, Their Tribe. Chen Li being stupid enough to fall for her beauty. He, looking at his Tribe being destroyed, filled with regret in his heart and vengeance, finally coincided with his devoted Tribe member ;also the guy who fell for him hard, Lu Xian. He helped him get his bloody revenge, but at what cost? His Family. His Mother, Father, older brother and older sister and his grandfather were long gone. Their Tribe was no more. What else was left was his already frail body getting sick. His foes no more standing was his goal. He knew he would not live long and grow old already. Thoe Xu Lian, his only hope persisted he would not let him die, there was no reason to live any longer.

Little does he know fate has a sudden change for him!