My Mistake
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Ongoing14m
Last published Mon, Sep 27, 2021
If you're looking for a cute family dynamic to heal those mommy/daddy issues of yours or just looking for some slow burn angst then this is the story for you!
(You may just want to read the prologue, it's more detailed. Or both, whatever floats your boat)
A backstory for my Oc, Dabria and her brother, Rene. Having magic is commonplace in society and everyone is taught about the 36 different dimensions. Dimensions A-Z and 1-10. Dimension A host is to Life magic. Everyone is born with Life magic and angel wings in this dimension, which also hosts heaven. Those with Life magic also cannot die, can heal others, and even create life. However, there are some, called "faults" who's magic or wings do not work properly. Rene and Dabria are faults and are placed in a special training course in the center of a large forest. Alone. For 3 months. Rene one day finds himself in a deadly situation, an accident. Normally, this wouldn't be much of a problem for those with Life magic. However, Rene's "fault" is that he can only use his magic on other people, animals, and plants, not himself. Dabria is strictly instructed to never use her magic on anything that isn't a plant. With her brother hanging on by a thread, will she listen and watch her brother die? Or will she disobey and face the consequences?
This story contains descriptions of death and other sensitive subjects as well as explicit language.
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