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Ongoing, First published Dec 14, 2014
Asra in the Wrath. 

Tell me what makes you tick? Is it the fact that you know not about yourself. Yet I know everything you could ever dream of knowing. Is it the mystery's of the world, that makes you take flight and fight in this war. For if you truly knew your real self, would you even be in this war? 

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I'm still editing this story. I have worked long and hard on this. The only reason I posted this story is for a critique. I want to get better at writing, but I can't really tell what I'm missing/fix in my story. But other than that enjoy. 

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