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Last published Tue, Sep 7, 2021
We accept: WoF OCs, Warriors OCs, and Shimigans OCs.
Welcome to @Shimigans's OC Rater. Here, you can send us a form of your very own (hopefully) Original Character, and we will try our best to respond with a post containing accurate, honest (and probably brutal) feedback and criticism. Please do not throw a tantrum if your character does not get the ideal rating you thought it would.
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