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Reads 201
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Parts 2
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We accept: WoF OCs, Warriors OCs, and Shimigans OCs. 

Welcome to @Shimigans's OC Rater. Here, you can send us a form of your very own (hopefully) Original Character, and we will try our best to respond with a post containing accurate, honest (and probably brutal) feedback and criticism. Please do not throw a tantrum if your character does not get the ideal rating you thought it would.

In our posts, there will be DOUBLE the notes from two different people, so that you may be given feedback from two different perspectives. This book is being monitored by both @RainShadow-Arts and @silvurdol. 

This Rater is currently: OpenAll Rights Reserved

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Ashes Of You And I (Completed) | ✔️ by Soulwithapen

"Her troubled eyes held fire. The kind of fire that was capable of burning me to ash." ***** I grabbed her chin with my free hand, making her look at me. "I hate that I don't know you. I hate not being a part of your life, like I was before." I leaned a little closer, as her intoxicating scent filled my lungs. "Trust me, I can't hate you, no matter how hard I tried." "So you have... " It came out as more of a question than a statement from her as she looked at me with her big blue eyes. "What?" I frowned, dropping my hand from her chin and grabbing her hand, instead. "You have tried hating me then?" She asked, tilting her head to the side. This time it sounded more like a statement than a question. "I have." I sighed, dropping my head in shame. "And it made me lose the most important person in my life." ***** One night. What harm can one night do? It can change lives. Turn best friends into enemies. Turn someone's life upside down. Emily Waters and Ryder Green, were inseparable, joint to the hip, always had each others back and loved each other behind the best friend facade. But one night changed it all. He thinks he has changed for worse but what he doesn't know is that Emily has changed for the worst. Three years later, what if the girl is back, with baggage that she doesn't think anyone could handle? What will happen when they meet? Will the sparks ignite again? Read to find out. *** Best rankings: #5 - romance (16/08/2022) #1 - funny (24/11/2022) #1 - streetfighter (03/09/2021) #3 - humour (24/11/2022) #5 - teenfiction (24/11/2022) #1 - comeback (15/04/2022) #4 - gangs (04/12/2021) #8 - badass (02/07/2021) #2 - bestfriends (16/08/2022) #9 - friendstolovers (06/07/2021) #2 - rebellion (03/09/2021) #4 - bully (21/08/2021) #2 - past (25/10/2021) #2 - Enemiestolivers (01/10/2021)

[☆] Corvidstorm's Heart | A Warriors Fanfiction [☆] by Blahaj-Ikea

Corvidstorm is a tall, long-legged, slender tom with perfect features. He has shiny, fluffy and well-kempt dark fur that looks dark blue in the right light and astonishing yellow eyes. If that wasn't enough, he has a deep and soothing voice that makes any she topple over for him in an instant. Even with scars, he's still considered handsome. He is a young Shadowclan warrior, and he is encouraged to get a mate soon to pass on all these perfect genetics. All the she's are after him, and all the toms want to be him. His battling and hunting skills are dismissed by everyone, and it makes him sick. His mother is the worst. She keeps telling him to hook up to a she ASAP. She doesn't want him to get out of camp, afraid that his purrfect fur might get ruined. So what if he falls in love with a cat from a different clan? [☆] The cover isn't mine. I edited the picture with Canva. Warrior Cats isn't mine. The characters in this book however, are all mine. 100 reads! Yayyy!! [27/5/2023]

[REWRITE] Wings Of Fire: Bluefire by DinoFefe

NOTE: This is kinda old now, dawg why is this getting reads now? A Wings Of Fire story that takes place in the depths of the Sky'wing Kingdom, following the story of a powerful hybrid dragonet who has to fight in the infamous arena regularly for most of his life, until... ? This a story based on the book series Wings Of Fire, obviously. In this universe, most of the canon events didn't happen, and are instead replaced by my own original stories and characters. No canon characters from the books exist in this world. There is at least one fantribe in this world, that fantribe belonging to me. Mud'wings don't exist in this world, because i have an unexplained hatred for them. WARNINGS: • Violence + blood • May contain explicit / aggresive language / Mild swearing, etc. • May contain character death / drama, etc. You may: • Draw fanart of the characters. • Write about the characters. [No NSFW, excluding violence/gore] *Both with credit* You may NOT: • Use the characters from this story in a roleplay. • Claim the characters as your own. • Make characters of any fantribes in this story (or any other of my stories) *without permission.* This rewrite was written by Fefek1 / DinoFefe#6956 / Fefe / Me. All of the art is drawn by me. This excludes most realistic backgrounds, as they are just photos I've found online. All dragons drawn are 100% drawn by me, though. CHANGES ADDED IN THIS REWRITE: • Name changes • A LOT more art and references! • Both minor and major plot changes • Overall written better, and more coherently • Better dialogue • More realistic characters (Hopefully?) • Most of the cringey stuff removed (Hopefully?) • Longer • More backstories/character lore [Old version: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/323920781-wings-of-fire-bluefire Read at your own risk, because It REALLY SUCKS

Doki Doki Literature Club (Sonic and FNF) by KattheCat1202

"Hi, Blaze the Cat here! Welcome to the Literature Club! It's always been a dream of mine to make something special out of the things I love. Now that you're a club member, you can help me make that dream come true in this cute game! Every day is full of chit-chat and fun activities with all of my adorable and unique club members: Sarvente, the youthful bundle of sunshine who values happiness the most; Dawn the Echidna, the deceivingly cute girl who packs an assertive punch; Ruvyzvat, the timid and mysterious one who finds comfort in the world of books; ...And, of course, Blaze the Cat, the leader of the club! That's me! I'm super excited for you to make friends with everyone and help the Literature Club become a more intimate place for all my members. But I can tell already that you're a sweetheart-will you promise to spend the most time with me? Just me... Just Blaze the Cat... J̨̡̛͈̹̩̠̪̻̩̩̬̦͌͋̃͐̈́͒̏̆͐̌̿Ư̛̲̠̙̤̯̫͎̞̦̗̙̯͔̝̤̯̘̺̑̓̌͋͐̍̿̐͊͌́́͌͂̕̚͢͢͡͞ST̼̥̠̯͖̓̔̅̃͗ ̢̭͆̌͘͟B̧̡̨̛̠̳͙̭̯̘̘͇͉̲̦̜͋͌̀̎́̂͗̐̍̊̚̚͘͠L̢̢͙͈̬͊̓͛͗͐͜͡A̧̛̙͍͉͕̥̣̼̗̲̫͓̻͓̱̯̮̥̽̒͆̄̈́̌̿̈̄̋̔̈̀̇͌̂͘͢͟͠͝Ź̨̬̜͙̲̥̣̺͚̩͓̗̖̞̦̔̒̿̍̂͋̎͌̎͗̂͑̓͘͞ͅĖ͍̰̲̝̫̪̫̱̙̀̔̾͒̈́̍̍͌̕͟ ̡̬̰̺̐́́̃͋͜T̢̢̧̠̖̰̗̃̍̆̀͊̔͘͜͠Ḧ̡̡̰̘̟̫̼̰̙͈́͊̍͌̎͊̾̉͆̒̑ͅE̢͓̳̟͉̣͎̰̦͎͆̐͌̑͗̿̑̅̕͝ ̛͖̗̲͖͍͓̐̊̾͊̅Ç̝̝̱͇̬̻̆̅͂̍͗̄͜͠͠A̱̯̼͉̩͓̮͈͋̿̃͊̑͂́͝Ṭ̞̱̤̤͙̍̓̆̓́͡!̛͓̩̜̯̤̝̹̮̲̰̮̯͙͖͎͓̙͎̉͌͋̑́̇̑̊̓͑̒͌͊͊̃̚͜͢͠͡͠͠ͅ!̧̢̡̛̗̰̟̝͖̫̫̩̥̤̹̣̰̀̾́̇̓͂͛͋́̈́̂̂͒̅͊̕͜͜͡!̢̢̛͎͉̗̲̝̼̟̼̹̥͚͈̿́̓͆̀̋̊̾̃͐̋͌͞ Ahahaha, what am I saying? All I'm trying to say is welcome to the Literature Club! I hope you enjoy your stay!" Y̘̟͉͖̝̰̪̟̖͙͈͕̻̍̎̃́̌̋̌̓͗͗̿͛͝O̠̯̿̇U̅̓͌̋

𝓛𝓲𝓵𝓲𝓮𝓼 | ʜɪɢʜ & ʟᴏᴡ by sannohdaime

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White Lies (Book 1) by help-me-think-of-one

Jesabel is a liar. When her only friend mysteriously disappears, she does what comes naturally. She keeps her truth from the world. Without warning, she is thrown into a web of lies far more dangerous and lethal than anything she could imagine. With an annoyingly charming boy by her side, can she unravel what she refuses to tell - the truth? WHITE LIES HAS BEEN REVISED, EDITED AND REWORKED! Happy late new year, friends! I'd like to take this opportunity to announce that White Lies, a story that has been up and running on Wattpad since 2011, has been re-written and revised for the coming decade. What does this mean? This entails the same characters you know and love, with better flow, better writing, more nuanced character development, more mature content, and entirely different plot lines. Jesabel's character has changed drastically since I last introduced her to the world (nearly NINE years ago! yikes!), and I wanted to make this story a more nuanced and modern take. When I had written White Lies, I had been just 14 years old. And I've done a ton of growing, learning, and unlearning over the years. This means that my characters have grown and developed with me. If you are an old friend and re-reader - welcome, and please enjoy the same old story you love with a brand new take! If you have started along this White Lies journey beginning in December and all throughout January, you might have read a half-edited and half-original version of the story. So please feel free to re-read at your leisure! I won't bite, I promise.

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