The Commotion Within
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Last published Tue, Jul 19, 2022
L ove. How is it supposed to feel? I've heard that it's powerful and from what I've experienced I can say that I believe it. When Al Green said, "It can make you do right or it can make you do wrong," people should've paid more attention.
There is one definite definition of love but when you look around there are several interpretations. Due to the alienated lessons taught from generation to generation- it's difficult to break what we've been to taught to learn something new. This story is all about hardship, trust, loyalty, pain, goodness, love, forgiveness and courage.
Always remember life is all about 10% action and 90% reaction.
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