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The Commotion Within
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Ongoing, First published Sep 06, 2021
Mature
L ove. How is it supposed to feel? I've heard that it's powerful and from what I've experienced I can say that I believe it. When Al Green said, "It can make you do right or it can make you do wrong," people should've paid more attention.

There is one  definite definition of love but when you look around there are several interpretations. Due to the alienated lessons taught from generation to generation- it's difficult to break what we've been to taught to learn something new. This story is all about hardship, trust, loyalty, pain, goodness, love, forgiveness and courage.

                            Always remember life is all about 10% action and 90% reaction.
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" LOVE " " A powerful word it makes you feel happy the feeling that you're contented of what you have because of love . For so many people love is dangerous " " If two hearts are meant to be together no matter how long it takes , how far they go , how tough it is they will still bring together to share their love forever " " Ever since the day you came into my life I know that you are the one I'll truly love till the end " " Be with someone who is proud to have you " " In every relationship there's going to be an arguments , fights , smiles, tears and up and downs . Thins said out anger , mad exes , attitudes , and jealousy . But at the end of the day if you truly love that person , you will stick around through the good and bad " " Real love is not based on romance , candle light dinner and walks along the beach . Infact it is based on respect , compromise , care and trust " How long will they fight their love to each other ? Are they gonna stay at each other side in different situation ? Can they able to prove their love ? Let's found out ...