Surrender
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The fan fiction, Surrender, is based off of a book series by Colleen Hoover called 'Hopeless'. However, many parts in Surrender have been altered for the fan fiction while other parts remain magnificently written by Ms. Colleen Hoover. Because of this, I cannot take credit for this piece of work, however, I hope you enjoy my version of her work as much as I enjoyed the original.
Due to her foster mother, Blair Kelley is 16 and has no phone, no internet, and no TV. And did I mention she's home-schooled? Blair finally gets to go to school and meets Harry Styles, a guy with a promiscuous reputation that rivals her own. Something about him sparks memories of her deeply troubled past, a time she’s tried so hard to bury. Though Blair is determined to stay far away from him, the intensity of the bond between them grows. But the mysterious Styles has been keeping secrets of his own, and once they are revealed, Blair is changed forever and her ability to trust may be a casualty of the truth.
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