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Ongoing, First published Sep 12, 2021
I am working on a story and this is the first chapter, even if it's short, and I still have a lot of planning and writing to do so I offer thee a draft of the first chapter, which also in the early stages of life.

Click click click. It's so cold. Click click click. Hillburry, Arizona is plagued with nightmares and the only thing Hillburry can hear, Click click click. It's cold when Hillburry hears it, click click click, it's so cold and it's hard to breathe. Click click click. He came into town, click click click, and it got so cold.
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