allegiant alternate ending (DISCONTINUED)
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Okay so here is my alternate ending to allegiant because as we all know it sucked I mean tris dieing that just sucked so here is a better version and please as you can already tell I am a awful speller so please forgive the mistakes and enjoy!!!
THIS STORY IS CRAP AND NOT FINISHED I DON'T THINK IT'S WORTH IT BUT READ IF YOU WANT.
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