"You win"

"You win"

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This is a short story over the fifteen year old Riley who hates the world and her family. Everything started when her dad died. Her mom quickly had a new boyfriend and she didn't really care about the family so Riley had to raise her twelve year old brother by her own. Riley her best friend, Abby, lived with them and helped Riley with everything. I wrote this story with the idea to make a horror story that's heavy but also really predictable so it doesn't get too scary for young readers who don't have a lot of experience with horror. I hope everyone likes it and have fun reading.
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