The Girl Detective
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Complete Tue, Nov 9, 202120m
Carmen is a 19-year-old detective looking for a killer that's known to be Stephen Browns. She has long wavy brown hair and blue eyes. 1 day, she had received a case about a kidnapping and the kidnapper is suspected to be Stephen Browns. She knew this was her chance to get revenge for her dead parents. Will this case end successfully? or will something happen?
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