How often have you felt sleepy while reading a book and how many times you eat your head trying to figure out where exactly your story has gone wrong? We all have hit a bump like this in our lives, havn't we?
"She went to the bus-stop, hopped on to the bus, sat at the window seat. Then she reached school and went for her classes. After her classes during the recess, she chatted with her two best friends". Aren't you wondering why this excerpt is a plain bore? Thinking of which what is exactly wrong with it! Answer is, basically everything! Because it becomes a snooze fest when you give hourly updates to your readers.
Instead of telling that your protagonist is very tensed about his exam results, why not show it. "He bit his nails and felt a growing ache within his belly, 'God please let me pass', he prayed". The magic of this is, it helps your audience feel the emotions of the protagonist.
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Riverfield, a beautiful town by the ocean, is home to the prestigious Decelis Academy.
It's also home to seven boys with a secret: they may simply seem like players of the famous sport, Nightball, but they're actually vampires.
To escape from their dark past, they try to lead normal lives as students - other than the occasional hitch since their rival Nightball team happens to be made up of werewolves. But in the end, these seven friends always find strength in each other.
Until one day, a new transfer student with curious strength causes the boys' forgotten past to slowly unravel.
DARK MOON: THE BLOOD ALTAR with ENHYPEN
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Original story: HYBE
Co-planning: HYBE / NAVER WEBTOON