The Fallen Kingdom
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Last published Sun, Sep 26, 2021
I wanted to write this book on here for feedback from comments. I am open to constructive criticism. This is a spin off from tangled/Rapunzel. If I did something wrong grammatically please tell me so I am aware and can fix it.
Also! If you have any better title ideas let me know(I suck at writing titles lol)
Pretty sure that's about it, have fun reading!
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