Here is a series of rejected short stories that I had sent out to competitions and submissions for publication. Some had been edited accordingly to the comments that I had received and some, for the ones that hadn't reply back, were published as it is. My notes on some background info and my thoughts are put together with the story.
I want to become a better writer, so please comment (nicely and constructively, please!) to each of these individual stories. Comment on my writing or my grammar, or whether I should expand the story or not.
Hope you enjoy them~